Hello! I am Victor Ellifritt, an English student at the University of Florida. I'm very passionate about innovation, community growth, and proper education, and my hope is to one day be able to live a life with a coexistence between these things. This business aims to be an example of this. I am offering a service of cleaning the streets and neighborhoods of animal corpses when they appear, keeping the area clean and sound. This service is aimed towards lower middle class and middle class neighborhoods/communities that contain couples who both work and lack time to take care of efforts such as this. The demographic will likely also contain couples with children. People in these areas will pay for an easy and cheap service that not only improves the atmosphere of the community but also protects against diseases. We do a service that simply isn't offered by most community services, and insofar as people care about their safety and health this service will be quite helpful.
I believe that I've created a model of business consistent with itself in regards to its goal, function, and purpose in society. At the very core of my business is a devotion to improving the lives of other people, and the service and process of accomplishment reflects this. Regarding feedback, I took time to be more specific yet also plainspoken in how I describe my demographic and goals in life. Also, I've focused more on having a complete and whole piece to present. Each idea leans into and connects with the other to create a whole.
I like the concept behind a more complete piece (who wouldn't?), but can you describe how your idea was improved? To be honest, I'm not sure there is a way to make it more complete as it was already well described. If more complete means the service is better performed, then how is that true? Because I only see a person picking up roadkill so many ways. I like how you described everything else though, and think that there probably wasn't too much to change from your original idea (though I'm still not sure that there is a need for your service if cities already provide that service).
ReplyDeleteI still love your idea for cleaning the streets, but I still have questions about the logistics behind your idea. How will people learn about your service, also how will you company make money. I do like how you described your demographic in such great detail though.
ReplyDeleteHey the idea itself is great is smart. It needs more development . But clearly you’re doing good things and keep going in that track because your ideas are good !
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