https://youtu.be/Gb4j-NWYOBg
For my third elevator pitch, I really liked how I was focusing on covering all bases on how to sell my idea for a company. I also felt I talked with more emotion this time as I focused more on looking at the person and not around them. I felt I really did change up how I was filming this pitch with this video so hopefully people like it more.
I think you've improved a lot over the past three elevator pitches. This pitch was much more natural and laid back, but still got the point across (and did so better than the previous ones). You're eyes seem a bit irritated...so that may detract from the experience for some viewers, but I think you're extremely calm manner (especially compared to the first video) offsets that.
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